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The children misheard you.
They broke open the jar
looking for petals
and found only flours.

The dust is everywhere,
settling everywhere,
on the refrigerator and the stove,
on the startled mother cat
yowling her pawprints
through the snowy floor,
on her sharp-eared kittens
prancing in the clouds.

The three-year old is screaming.
He has cut his finger on the glass,
there are red streaks in the snow,
and his white-faced brother
stares up at you with a look
commonly reserved for
the confused and the betrayed.
:icongabrielgadfly:
This poem and many others can be read on my website, [link]
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Snowstorm by ~GabrielGadfly ( Suggested by `LiliWrites and Featured by ^Beccalicious )
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~GabrielGadfly Nov 26, 2012  Professional Writer
Thank you!
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Mood: Love Dazed ~akky3210 Sep 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Really fantastic work. On one level it's light and fun, and on another it's something else entirely. Great poignancy here. Love it!
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~Doodelay Mar 6, 2012  Student Writer
Wow ok at first i didn't get this until a comment told me to read it a second time for understanding.

Wow, the snow is not snow, its FLOUR

and he's betrayed because he was told that in the face would be flowers?

so cute.

an innocent mistake :]
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:iconeffamay:
I thoroughly enjoyed this:)
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`catluvr2 Feb 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
That's beautiful.

Sometimes things deserve a second look before you appreciate them fully. I'm finding that to be more and more true these days.
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:iconthedibluver:
Short, but beautiful imagery. Good Job and Grats on the DD!
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:iconthedibluver:
Short, yet beautiful imagery. Good job! Grats on the DD
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:iconyagamiseven:
this is really good
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